Monday, February 16, 2009

hey my love...

All it took for u
To make me feel 'taken away'
is just a Glance;
I still remember the way
u looked deep into my eyes
with love overflowing
At that time i didn't know
that,U are that special person
U were not the smartest
U were not the brightest
U were not the coolest
And yet u had something
which made me to starve for u!
At that time i didn't know
that U are that special person
It was that one look
U filled my heart
U stood as meaning to my dreams
At that time i didn't know
that U are that special person
But at the moment when you were shedding tears
for a petty failure
I felt like coming to you
took your arms
And say 'Don't worry my dear'
But only my eyes could speak.
when I carried your sorrows
to my den
And when your sorrows
upset my day's work,I realised
U are that special person
Deeply rooted in my heart
when you spoke those
first few words with me
I could hardly keep my feet on ground
And i felt what exactly the feel of love is....
when you took my cheeks
by your palms in my dream
i felt what exactly the feel of love is...
But the problem was i never thought of telling you
that you are the one who made me to know
what exactly the feel of love is...
And the time came
When you left me
with nothing but your imprints in my heart
I was looking at you walking away from me
I was desperate
At that time I didn't know
that love could be this painful
And if u ever return my boy
I wanna tell u this
I was in Love.

4 comments:

3 rd person said...

This poem is all abt puppy luv or infactuation...mite b the amatuer poet cudnt differentiate between the luv n infactuation...the topic sud be like "hey my infactuation"....

creativity hub said...

Hey my love - listen to me
Your love threw me - far and away
When you go I'm so sad and lonely
But it's only until you're here again
And when you're here agai-ai-ain

I wanna feel your charms
I wanna hold you in my arms
I've gotta make love to you-ou
Oh, to you-ou
I wanna feel your charms
I wanna hold you in my arms
I've gotta make love to you-ou
Oh, just to you

Hey my love - so warm and tender
Please remember - that I need you
When you're near I can't help believin'
You're never leavin' 'cause I love you-ou-ou

NICE.K said...

according 2 mee..
topic is perfect..
no one can draw a clear line between love and infactuation..

u made me to think of my love..
thanks..

"It was that one look
U filled my heart
U stood as meaning to my dreams"

these lines may look simple but made me to feel again "the very strange merry feelings tat i felt quite long days before"

" I was looking at you walking away from me
I was desperate
At that time I didn't know
that love could be this painful"

i hope very few people have the tendency to hold or bring this killer feeling back( u can hold this till ur death).

To be frank, i love this ..
you made me to think or ponder of my love.. thankss for tat..

kavya if u have any photo of tat person... do post tat.. i hope this won't be just a imagination...

ruby said...

very nice feel...... infaction s nothin but iniative of love......